The Miracle of Love - Fiction - Post Number 8: #MyFriendAlexa
Credits: Col. Gopinath Menon
The waves crashed on the rocks, a sound that Sudesh loved, as he sat feeling the freshness of the spray on his face. Voices echoed around him, and he could feel the vibration as people jogged along the beach, and his sightless eyes turned towards the movement. He had been coming to this spot for many months now, ever since he had shifted to Mumbai, after his mother had passed away.
The sound of the sea evoked a vision that he could only feel, not see. He could smell the delicious puris that Ram Prasad was frying, very near to where he sat. Every day the cheerful proprietor would look for a moment when there were few customers, and hand over a plate of piping hot puris and delicious potato curry to the gentle blind man who sat there, so young and so uncomplaining!
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Sudesh heard the tinkling of anklets near him. "Who is it?" he asked curiously. "May I sit here?" asked a soft voice, and he had a sudden mental vision of a lovely young girl, delicate and lively.
"Do sit down!" he invited, "That is if you have nothing else to do!" He heard the thud as she sat down beside him, and sensed the smile in her voice. "I am a regular customer of Ram Prasad's, and a great fan of his puris. He told me about you the last time I was here!"
They were interrupted by Ram Prasad who brought two plates of hot puris, and they sat in silence, munching away contentedly, not wanting to break the silence.
"You haven't told me your name!" Sudesh asked suddenly. "Kavita!" she replied, and the ice was broken. They began to talk about all kinds of subjects, and Sudesh tried to conjure up her face. Was she short or tall, fair or dark? He sensed that she had long hair and sparkling black eyes, judging by the easy way she laughed. Her heart-shaped face would have an expression of mischief, and there would be a round red bindi in the centre of her forehead. He wished he could have a glimpse of her. What did she feel when she looked at him? Pity? He hoped not because he hated being pitied.
The hours flew by as though they had wings. They had already drunk two cups of masala chai and the breeze had grown stronger, as the sun prepared to set on the horizon. Ram Prasad was closing up shop and it was time for Sudesh to go home as well. "Goodnight, Sudeshji!" Kavita's voice tinkled in his ear.
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"Will I see you again?" he asked, rather ironically, and she laughed as she replied, "Why not! You couldn't keep me away from Ram Prasad's puris!" Sudesh heard her go with a strange pang in his heart. He had never felt this way before.
For a change, he kept sitting, immersed in his own thoughts. He felt a warm glow at the thought of his new friend. But how could he, a blind man, harbour such thoughts about any girl? He tried to imagine Kavita's face again. Maybe she was like a poem herself, judging by her name! He imagined her large lustrous eyes smiling at him, giving him hope.
And suddenly his shoulders slumped. How could he expect a beautiful young girl to marry a blind man like himself? When Ram Prasad came by to guide him back home, he found him sitting listlessly, a picture of dejection.
"Sudesh Babu, I thought meeting Kavita would have cheered you up! Instead, you are sitting like a monument of despair!" Sudesh got up with difficulty and groped around for his cane. "Ram Prasad, don't introduce me to any more girls!" he groaned. "I liked Kavita, even though I have no hope that she will ever reciprocate!"
Ram Prasad whooped in joy. "Congratulations, Sudesh Babu! She is a lovely girl!" He went on happily. "I have been trying to bring you two together for some time now!" as Sudesh heard him out in disbelief, he said, "She is a beautiful person. When she was young, she was involved in an accident in which she lost her eyesight! Never once has she complained or thought of it as a disability!"
Sudesh listened, lost for words. He was elated because now he could ask Kavita to marry him. He was strangely happy that he himself was blind because he could always imagine her large lustrous eyes looking at him with hope and love!
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This story was so heartwarming. I really loved it. Reminded me a little of the story "The Eyes are Not Here" by Ruskin Bond. Your style of narration is really good.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Leha! Your generous comment just made my day! :) I must read the story by Ruskin Bond.
DeleteThat was a beautiful story, I quite enjoyed the narration too. BTW, reading your story, I could smell and taste the freshly fried puris too. Oh my, now I will have to make it. This must be the first time two people must have fallen in love over puris. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Anshu! I love puris too! :)
DeleteIt’s such a romantic story with all insecurities about disability and love found the most unexpected way... i loved it totally
ReplyDeleteRicha, thank you so much. Love does find a way, doesn't it?
DeleteWow. I love happy endings. Enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Huma! I am happy too! :)
DeleteLoved this story, Deepti! They seem like the perfect pair. :)
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I love happy endings too! Thanks, Aditi!
DeleteLooks like the puri wala was also a good match maker. All's well that ends well.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely! A puri wala with a big heart! :)
DeleteLovely story.
ReplyDeleteI have been an admirer of your writing for a long time. This story is so beautiful and heartwarming that I can't stop smiling while I type this comment.
ReplyDeleteSonia, that is such a generous comment. I can't stop smiling now! Thank you! :D
DeleteBeautiful story.. could imagine the sight on the shore, hear the waves and smell the puris and kavita's laughter..
ReplyDeleteI am so happy to hear that... the best compliment for a writer. Thank you!
DeleteEngaging story :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Pranoti!
DeleteBeautiful gripping story. Wonderfully penned!
ReplyDeletePrerna, thank you ever so much. I am happy that it touched you.
DeleteThis reminded me of a story by Ruskin Bond where a blind man meets a girl under similar circumstances during a train journey.
ReplyDeleteThe marriage twist you added at the end took me by surprise though, and made me ponder why society expects differently abled people to marry only those who are differently abled...
You're the second person to remark on the Ruskin Bond story. I must read it. Actually, I feel that a differently abled person would be better off marrying someone who would be able to help him overcome his disability. However, I needed this story to touch the heart. It's totally fictitious, of course.
Deleteshort and nice. specially the ending part i liked the most
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. I am glad that you enjoyed it.
DeleteI love short stories and this is indeed so beautifully written by you, I feel the journey and there is that magical flow, the weaving of words to conjure up an image and nurture our emotions as we move the plots in the story, and the twist in the tale is perfectly captured.
ReplyDeleteThere is hope and there is reward if we have the patience and perseverance but in such challenging times we generally succumb and not able to cope with the demand to get going and wait for our turn in life. Two beautifully crafted characters and the support role played by the puri maker completes the story.
Thank you so much, Nihar, for that beautifully crafted comment. It makes me happy to see how deeply you have gone into my story. Hopes lies eternal in the human heart and challenges can be met with courage and fortitude. Thank you, again!
DeleteSeriously reminded me of Ruskin Bond. You are blessed with great story writing talent. I love such happy endings.
ReplyDeleteI treasure that compliment. Thank you so much!
DeleteNice short story. simple and beautiful
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story, enjoyed a lot
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. That makes me happy!
DeleteHappy ending! Just the way I like it :) Loved your narration, could visualize everything.
ReplyDeleteRashi, that is the ultimate compliment. Thank you so much. You made my day! :)
DeleteBeginning of a love story. Physically blind, they see each other through their mental eyes.
ReplyDeleteYes, they do, Abhijeet. A love story that needs nothing more than love and understanding!
DeleteNow, isn't it beautiful when something like this happens? Goes on to prove that beauty and love arise in the eyes and the heart. Physical handicaps don't matter if the feelings are real. Beautiful story!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Varsh! The heart does play a significant role in identifying one's soul mate.
DeleteI loved how the story turned and ended. Beautiful writing, Deepti. Your words brought out the characters so well. You also got me salivating for Ramprasads puris:)
ReplyDeleteThank you ever so much for the appreciative comment. I am thrilled. And yes, I love puris myself! :)
Deleteawwww such a heartwarming beautiful tale. Loved the narration.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your heartwarming comment!
DeleteThis was such a heartwarming story,
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DeleteA nice twist..!
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the twist! :)
DeleteWhat a moving story! The blind can always see with the heart's eye. Loved every bit of it.
ReplyDeleteThank you ever so much, Jai! The heart's eye does always see further, I feel.
DeleteI loved how it keep me glued until end and such a beautiful thought.
ReplyDeleteI am so happy to hear that! Your comment is truly heartwarming. Thank you.
DeleteBeautifully penned. I wonder how Kavita envisaged him to be. happy tale.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Priya! There's a whole new story there, right? :)
DeleteAmazing writeup! it's beautiful #ViddhReads #MyFriendAlexa
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DeleteA heartwarming story! You painted a very vivid scene. I could also feel the emotions of the people and their expressions.
ReplyDeleteThat's such a wonderful comment, Sona. Thank you so much. You made my day!
DeleteThe freshly made puris made my mount water. PS: I am an expat
ReplyDeleteThat explains it, Lavanya! :) The smell of the hot puris and the delicious masala always make my mouth water too, even though I live in India! :)
DeleteI love when stories revolve around food, being a foodie, and alu puri being a favourite. Such a straightforward, simple and heartwarming story.
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ReplyDeleteIla, I am so thrilled to hear that. Thank you!
DeleteA lovely tale, good that Ram Prasad decided to play cupid
ReplyDeleteAn unlikely Cupid, but his tactic certainly worked, didn't it? Thank you, Neha!
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ReplyDeleteSujata, your words have thrilled my heart. Thank you so much for the lovely words.
DeleteSuch a beautiful story, Deepti!
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DeleteI was hoping it would be a happy ending and it was..:) thank you for the sweet story!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the equally sweet comment, Jayanthi!
DeleteYour narration is superb and the fluid progression enhances the descriptive writing. I'm glad the story ended on a positive note. Well written!
ReplyDeleteDipali, a lovely compliment to make my day! Thank you ever so much!
DeleteBeautiful story with a happy ending. I was hoping it had a happy ending.
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DeleteSuch a lovely story
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DeleteShort and sweet. Heart-touching story. Loved it
ReplyDeleteSashwata, thank you so much!
DeleteAwww.. this is sooo romantic :) May they both be united with the sight of love!! Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteWhat a poetic comment! Thank you so much!
DeleteLoved your story.. Touched my heart. . I could actually visualize every episode. . Liked your narrative
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DeleteThis is so touching. Looks like he could learn her happy demeanour :)
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Dipika, thank you so much.
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DeleteA beautiful and heartwarming story. Loved the way you narrated it.
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DeleteBeautiful, short and sweet story. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Deepa! I'm thrilled!
DeleteThis was such a warm and touching romance! I so wanted Kavita and Sudesh to get together!
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Yogeeta, that is such a wonderful comment. Thank you so much. I am honoured.
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Thank you so much, Manas, for your appreciative comment!
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Yes, Alpana, Ram Prasad was like an alchemist in the story. Thank you so much for your appreciative comment!
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Aloo puri is always welcome, right? Thanks so much, Nayantara, for the lovely comment! :)
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DeleteSuch a lovely heart warming sweet love story I must say. Loved the narration and the way you dropped the suspense in the end.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. I am thrilled that you loved the narration and the suspense!
DeleteSimple and happy story. Reminded me of movie 'Kaabil'.
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DeleteThis was such a heart-warming story :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Agnivo!
DeleteYears ago I had read a similar story of blind man in train journey, I don't remember the author. This was a delight to read . However I don't think a person with disabilities have to marry only with another disabled person. All of are disabled, some mentally and others physically .
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment, Pragnya! I also do not feel that a person with disabilities has to marry another person with a similar condition. I just wanted to make this a story with a subtle twist, that's all!
DeleteVery well articulated. loved this heart touching story
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your appreciative comment, Sudha!
DeleteHappy ending are always good.. Love reading this story
ReplyDeleteI love happy endings too, Priyal! Thank you so much!
DeleteThat was emotional heart-warming story. Well written.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Kinshoo, for your appreciation!
DeleteHow nice of Ram Prasad to play Cupid like that. I hope Kavita reciprocates the feelings
ReplyDeleteYes, indeed, Mahak!The story has a happy ending, with Ram Prasad playing Cupid and Kavita and Sudesh living happily ever after! :)
DeleteLovely story. I love the way you have used setting to make the story interesting. Keep writing would love to know what happened with Kavita and Sudesh...
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Mayura, thank you for that lovely, encouraging comment! I would love to write more about Kavita and Sudesh!
DeleteReally loved reading the story. Very keen to know what happens next. Well done Deepti
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your appreciative comment! I am thinking of a sequel!
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DeleteBeautiful story. I loved the concept of love over puris. True love is always blind. And as the blog of your name, your story also ties the reader
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful story. Had me wondering a little bit though if a blind man would think about visual things like lustrous eyes and red bhindi. Lead me to the conclusion that perhaps Sudesh was not born blind but became blind during the course of his life. Enjoyed the story.
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