THE JOY OF COLOURS: #MYFRIENDALEXA
INDIGO
UnsplashThe riverbank looked like a patchwork of colours with
clothes of various hues drying on the rocks, vivid in places, and faded at others.
Gopal, the dhobi, was busy with his latest bundle. His back ached as he bent
over, slapping each garment against the smooth rock that he had created as his
special niche. As he squeezed the soap water out, he heaved a sigh, looking up
at the clear sky. The sun shone down fiercely, and he was grateful for the
warmth that drank up the moisture from the clothes he had already washed.
Another ten minutes and he would be ready to fold them in a neat bundle so that
he could place them in a white sheet to be distributed to various houses.
The whites were the problem. They needed to be
scrubbed till they were squeaky clean and then immersed in a solution of indigo
blue which would enhance their pristine whiteness. Gopal had pitched a clothesline
only for the whites and as they flapped, hands and legs moving in the breeze,
he could almost imagine them as real persons.
“Hey, Gopal, have you finished?”
Kaveri’s dulcet voice penetrated his thoughts and he
stood up with a start. His beautiful Kaveri, as vibrant as the river she had
been named after! She stood before him, her kohl-lined eyes sparkling, as she
smiled at him. She was like the sun, he thought, as bright and as warm. One
day, when he had earned enough, he would marry her and live happily ever after.
“Gopal, stop daydreaming! Is my bundle ready?” Kaveri’s
voice broke through his meandering.
“Almost done!” He folded the clothes that belonged to
the landlord, Ram Charan, and tied them into a neat bundle.
“Make sure you get paid,” he said to her. “He hates parting
with his money.”
Ram Charan was the wealthiest man in the village, but
also the biggest miser. He squeezed his tenants dry, compelling them to pay for
all repairs, sometimes twice over. Since he owned most of the houses in the
village, they had no other choice but to pay up. Most were labourers and daily
wage earners who could not afford to build a home for themselves.
Kaveri sashayed off with the bundle, aware that Gopal
was looking at her. She was not coquettish by nature, but she was in love with Gopal,
and she waited for the day when she would be married to him, and they would
live in a little house of which she would be the mistress.
Ram Charan was sitting outside on the porch of his
house.
“Kaveri, do you grow more beautiful every day or are my
eyes deceiving me?” he chortled. He enjoyed flirting with the village damsels
as long as his wife was not within earshot.
Kaveri tossed her head.
“Maybe you should call your wife and repeat that question,
“she said in a loud voice, glancing towards the inner room of the house.
“Hey, no need of that! I was only joking!” Ram Charan
said softly, casting a worried glance behind him. His face darkened as he
watched her leave.
Having received the payment for the clothes, Kaveri
made her way back to her tiny house where she lived with her mother and younger
sister, Rachna.
Her mother had made rotis and potato, and she placed a
plate of it before her elder daughter, with an onion on the side.
“Kaveri, Mohan had come earlier asking for his payment.
He was apologetic but said that we had to pay him for three months of
groceries. He wondered if we could pay him at least a token amount.”
Mohan, the grocer, was in love with Kaveri. He had
made overtures to her, hinting that he hoped to marry her. However, Kaveri kept
rebuffing him. His fascination for her ensured, however, that they got their
groceries on credit. She was surprised that he had raised the issue of payment
now. Maybe, it was because he had heard about her and Gopal.
Gopal had just finished soaking his whites in indigo.
They sparkled like a washing advertisement on television. He smiled, as he hummed,
“Washing powder Nirma…” under his breath. No one could make the clothes look as
clean as he could. Was it in the strokes he applied, or was it because he enjoyed
the whole process of pounding the dirt out and making every garment pristine?
Maybe it also had to do with his upbringing, when his grandmother, God bless
her soul, had regaled him with stories of good winning over evil – the tales of
Krishna and Rama, the avatars of Lord Vishnu. With sound good sense she had
added, “It is like washing clothes – removing the dirt on them.”
From that time onwards, he felt that what he did was a
metaphor for turning evil into good. No little spot escaped him, and he would
spend hours washing it out, stopping only when it had disappeared. No wonder then,
that he was the most sought-after dhobi, and he took great pride in the fact.
Then, one evening, all pandemonium broke out.
Kaveri and Rachna had been walking home one evening when
a couple of assailants pounced on them. There were three men, and since it was
twilight, it was difficult to distinguish them. They had covered their faces and
the leader had disguised his voice as he barked orders to the others.
“Grab them and tie their hands up,” he said in a
guttural voice. As the girls attempted to scream, they were gagged and dragged
along to a deserted barn. Kaveri tried to signal to her sister, but Rachna was too
terrified to respond. Eyes closed, she kept whimpering.
The men were muttering amongst themselves. Kaveri
thought she heard Ram Charan’s name being mentioned. Before she could react,
one of the men grabbed her. As he tried to kiss her, she butted him with her
head as hard as she could. He slapped her hard and she lost her balance,
hitting her head against the wall.
When Kaveri regained consciousness, it was dark in the
room. Her head was aching, but she tried to look around her. When her eyes got
used to the darkness, she could see a figure lying against the wall in front of
her. She tried to get up, but a bout of dizziness overcame her.
When she finally crawled towards the prone figure, she
was horrified to see that it was Rachna. Her eyes were closed, and she seemed
to be hardly breathing.
“Rachna, Rachna, wake up!” she whispered, shaking the
girl frantically. Rachna’s eyes remained closed. Kaveri got to her feet with difficulty
and hobbled to the tiny window. It was dark outside. There was a breeze blowing
and she could see the village lights at a distance. She shook her head, trying
to keep her chaotic thoughts in order. There was a deep dread within her mind.
What had the men done to Rachna and to her?
There was a groan behind her. She rushed over to Rachna,
whose eyes had fluttered open.
“Rachna, my dear, I am here!”
Rachna stared at her for a moment and then her expression
cleared.
“Kaveri…,” she whispered.
“We need to get out of here at once. Can you walk?”
Slowly, she helped the other girl to her feet. There
was blood on her white kurta, blood that seemed to have seeped out during the struggle.
May it not be anything more, Kaveri prayed silently.
The local doctor examined them in silence.
“Dr. Sajan…?” Kaveri’s voice was apprehensive.
He shook his head. “No harm done!” He smiled at her
relieved face.
It was as if a huge weight had rolled off her chest. Rachna
was untouched, and so was she.
Gopal was irate. “Kaveri, how dare these men abduct
you both? Who are they anyway?”
“I think I heard one of them mention Ram Charan,” she
replied.
Gopal wanted to go over and interrogate Ram Charan
right away. However, Kaveri shook her head. “Let it go, Gopal. Luckily they did
not harm us.”
“We must make sure they do not do it again,” he retorted.
“These men feel that the village girls are their personal property.”
However, the matter was dropped. Gopal was like a
shadow. He went everywhere with Kaveri, and soon, he proposed to her, not only
because he loved her but so that he could be a protector to the entire family.
Kaveri sat by the window looking at the railway track
that shone silver in the moonlight. She turned to Rachna, her eyes filled with
concern.
“Are you feeling fine, child?” she asked.
Rachna nodded, her hands curled over her stomach, as
though trying to protect the little life within, a consequence of the attack on
them. She had been unconscious at the time.
It had only been weeks later when they sensed the cover-up.
Kaveri had immediately guessed the identity of one of the perpetrators.
“You and your
accomplices need to confess your crime. It was an act of cowardice to rape her
while she lay unconscious.”
He had protested. “I have no idea what you are talking
about. How dare you accuse me and my friends of the crime? For all we know,
your sister must have had a secret lover!”
Finally, she broke through his defences when she threatened
to talk to his family.
“Do whatever you have to do,” he said in desperation. “They
will not believe you anyway. You have no proof. There were two others with me
after all!”
The moment he spoke, he realized he had made a grave
error. Kaveri pounced on it immediately.
“I am going to the police right away. I have your
name. They will get the other two names out of you as well.”
He succumbed to her pressure and promised her that he would
do the right thing. He wanted a couple of days to set his affairs in order and
Kaveri agreed. Much to her chagrin, he reneged on his promise.
As the ambulance made its way towards the clearing, the
family of the man sat around, wailing as they beat their breasts.
“How could he have fallen on the track?” sobbed his
distraught mother as her husband tried to comfort her. The man’s two siblings
stood around, two monuments of despair. The whole village was cast in gloom at
the death.
“How will we live without you, dearest Sajan?” the mother
continued to cry loudly as the hospital attendants lifted the body of their
doctor, their eyes filled with sorrow.
Gopal was busy washing clothes when Kaveri handed him
a small bundle. Amongst other clothes, there was a white kurta – the one that
Rachna had worn when she had been accosted. The police had already examined it
and added the details to their evidence file. The new bloodstains would not be
noticed, especially not after Gopal washed them away and soaked the garment in
indigo.
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