THE JOY OF COLOURS: #MYFRIENDALEXA
BROWN
UnsplashThe brown earth drank in the moisture that the monsoons
had provided greedily, the first rains of the season. Farmers had been praying
for this, as their crops had begun to wilt, but now, at the first drop of
deliverance, they had perked up, lifting their heads for succour.
Sujata smiled at her husband, Milan.
“The Gods have heard our prayers. We will have a good crop
this year.” Her careworn eyes were bright again, as a ray of hope had entered
her heart. Looking at the tiny dusky babe who lay in the makeshift cradle
created from a sari, she smiled. He had brought the rains, and the good luck
along with him. On the day he was born, their landlord had summoned Milan.
“Milan, you are a good worker. If you are ready to
work more, I will increase your wages,” he had announced, clapping the younger
man on his shoulder. Milan had winced at the hearty blow, but his heart sang
with joy. There was so much they could do with more money!
Sujata was thrilled when she heard the good news.
“Our little one has brought luck with him. Maybe, it
is time our fortunes changed,” she remarked softly, as she caressed the tiny
downy head of her son. “We should name him Bhagya.”
The name stuck and Bhagya’s birth was celebrated in a
grand fashion, with the word ‘luck’ firmly attached to him from the very start.
As he grew older, the fortunes of the family flourished, and the brown patch of
earth that formed the crux of their property blossomed with the best crop that
had been seen in the village. Bhagya studied at the local school and though he
was an average student, he was popular with his teachers and his peers because
of his helpful and friendly nature.
By the time Bhagya was a teenager, he was a strapping
young lad who looked older than his age. He was as brown as the land itself maybe
because he spent much time in the sun. He was his father’s shadow during
harvest time. However, as time went on, Bhagya turned a trifle lethargic. Now
when his father needed help, he would make excuses. He had a gang of friends with
whom he spent the whole day, and at times, his parents did not see him till
late at night.
Years went by, and Bhagya finished school. He got
admission in the local college which was around six kilometres away. He was a
regular student except during the days of the harvest when he and Milan would
work together in the field.
Things came to a head when, one day, Milan needed help
with the harvest. Bhagya was nowhere to
be seen and to top it all, there was a sudden downpour which ruined the crop.
When Bhagya returned, he saw his parents sitting on
the floor in utter dejection.
“Where have you been, Bhagya?” his mother got up and strode towards him, her eyes emitting fire.
“I had some work in college,” was his immediate response.
“With your gang of friends?” Sujata spat the words
out. “What was so important that you abandoned your father during the harvest
when he needed you urgently?”
Bhagya opened his mouth to reply, but Milan quelled
him with a glance filled with disgust and disappointment.
“Don’t bother talking to him, Sujata!” he said
wearily. “We have lost everything anyway.” He rose and walked into the next
room, his shoulders bowed.
Bhagya’s eyes filled with trepidation.
“Ma, I am sorry! I didn’t realise this would happen.”
He had never seen his parents look so dejected.
Sujata’s eyes filled with tears. She turned to him
despondently.
“Maybe we pampered you a bit too much. You were always
our lucky charm from the moment you were born. Even today, before the downpour,
we still had faith that we would be able to salvage the harvest.” She burst out
crying.
Bhagya’s eyes were also moist. He knew that he had failed
them, but of late, his brain had not been functioning the way it should have.
It was a hard season for the family. Not only had they
lost the crop, but they had a massive loan to pay off to the village
moneylender whose interest rates were crippling. There was not enough money to
buy new seeds even, and the brown land lay before them, fallow and uncultivated.
What was worse was that Bhagya could not pay his fees though the college had
given him some time to pay up. But with no money coming in, things were looking
grave.
However, there was one more blow staring Milan and Sujata
in the face. They had been called by the Principal of Bhagya’s college.
The Principal looked at them gravely. When he finally
spoke, his words struck them to the heart.
“I am sorry, but there is no easy way for me to say
this. Bhagya’s grades have been going down and at this rate, he will fail this
semester.” His heart went out to the two people sitting before him looking
helpless. So, he did not speak about the nonpayment of fees. However, Milan’s
response was prompt.
“Could you give us some time more, please? We will collect
the money for Bhagya’s fees as soon as we can.”
“Of course, “was the answer. “However, do keep an eye
on your son. He needs to bring up his grades.”
That evening, Sujata went into Bhagya’s room to place
his washed clothes in his cupboard. Bhagya had stepped out for some fresh air.
When he got back, his parents were waiting for him. He
already knew what the Principal had told them that morning.
“Is there anything you want to share with us?” Sujata
asked, quietly.
Bhagya looked puzzled and shook his head.
“If your grades fall further, you might fail.” His
father’s voice was controlled.
Bhagya nodded but made no reply. He walked across the
room, but as he reached the door, Sujata called out his name. Bhagya turned
only to see her hold something out in her palm. Something that sparkled in the
light. Bhagya started at the sight of the syringe, his face wan in the dim
light.
The brown earth looked pale in the morning sun. It had
been an exhausting period over the past six months, and Milan and Sujata had
skimped to save money to buy new seeds.
Bhagya was at a de-addiction centre, trying to get rid
of the demons that attacked him when the craving hit him, which was often. His
body rebelled, leaving him screaming in agony. The doctors had advised his parents
not to visit him till he was a bit better.
It was time for the next harvest. The brown land was
covered with a lush green crop, healthy and abundant. Life had started looking
up again for the family. Bhagya was back home with them. He had turned into a
strapping young man again, his face brown from helping his parents in the
fields. He was determined not to make the same mistakes again.
Milan smiled at Sujata, his heart brimming with
satisfaction as they looked at the crop. Their luck had, indeed, changed for
the better.
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I don't believe in luck but good story line. Love the characters.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Cindy! I take this as luck but it could as well be climate change! :)
DeleteHahaha, true!
DeleteA lovely read. I liked how you incorporated the color so well. Looking forward to read more post from you on the theme.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Ritu! This is my sixth story... two more to go before I finish the challenge! :)
Deleteloved the story, and the fact that you brought in the ills of addiction.
ReplyDeleteHarshita, Thank you ever so much. Addiction is truly a malady in today's world!
DeleteLoved the story line
ReplyDeleteJyoti, I am so happy to hear that. Thank you.
DeleteBeautiful story line. Lovely read.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Charu! I am thrilled that you enjoyed this story.
DeleteMam motivated story.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Richa! I am happy that you feel so.
DeleteAs always... you write nah.. weave stories so well... I am your new fan.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Neerja! That's music to my ears.
DeleteLovely warm and positive story
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Deepika!
DeleteBeautifully penned with a shade of color.. Luck is important.
ReplyDeleteI believe in luck myself, Swati. Thank you so much.
DeleteWhat a feel good story//
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Manali.
DeleteVery well written and a good characterisation... Short story with a wonderful message in it
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Srikanth, for your wonderful comment.
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